It’s that time again and one I love – Flash Fiction Friday. It’s where a group of very talented writers get together and use a single picture – 100 words, no more and no less, and describe the scene. Today is haunting… Or so I think. Tell me what you think. And please stop by and visit everyone else.
DONE
Tears slipped from Jason’s eyes as he stood in the rain, his heart racing. He’d lost her – the one woman in his life who understood him and his needs. Sniffing, he shook his head as he walked toward the pier. For some reason he was comforted by the chill sweeping through his body. There was no doubt she completed him and what did he do? With one word he’d forced her out of his bed and his life and there was no way he
could live without her. Walking closer to the raging water, he whispered his last word. “Done.”
I so hope you enjoyed…
Kisses xxx
Cassandre
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Venus Cahill:
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Bonni Sansom:
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Leann Mitchell:
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how painful, poor guy, haunting even…think I need to go listen to some more Buffett
Oh my…I feel so bad for the guy…Great FFF by the way.
Yes, haunting and haunted is quite right. WHat was it, I wonder, that he said to her that hurt her so? While eords can never be undone, they can be woven into a bigger, greater more compelling story. This one begs that………I loved it, Cassandra, as I am sure you knew I would. Creatures of pain and love, are we:) xo
Very Haunting. Great FFF
He seems to be acting rashly. Poor guy. Haunting story and cool picture!
I love these pics – they take all of us as writers to a different place
Touching emotional details that really took me in and made me feel his pain. Great flash as always, Cass!
Thanks Kendel – I love doing these
Haunting Flasher!!
One word Ouch. I know how that feels. Poor guy. Great Flash!
Thank you so much lady. I sometimes feel the level of haunt in me
Love it Cass. Beautifuly haunting, leaving you hanging on.
I’m so glad you think so – thank you for stopping by
Damn. Wow. Fuck. One word? What the heck was the one word that screwed up everything? Now he says one word as he walks toward the abyss – Done. Well, my one word is – GREAT. This is a great FFF.
Why thank you sir – sometimes all is needed is one word and you’re either broken or aloft…
Loved it Cass. You can feel his pain and despair. Lovely post!
Beautifully written as always