Keeping a Secret – Flash Fiction Friday

The oh so sweet picture managed to bring out my wicked side. You know I can’t allow my characters to just be happy…right?

“I never thought I’d see you again,” Scarlet whispered as she wrapped her arms around Devlin’s neck and kissed him softly. Easing back his dark eyes troubled her.

“I couldn’t stay away. You mean so much to me.”

Her eyes filling with tears she could tell he was holding something back. “What’s wrong, my love?”

“Wrong? Nothing.” Looking away Devlin inhaled deeply. “Let’s enjoy being together. It’s a beautiful night.”

“Devlin, please tell me what’s bothering you. We haven’t seen each other in months. You seem so distant.”

“Just worried.”

“About me finding out?” Her enraged voice startled them both.

See – just can’t help myself.

Merry Christmas!


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15 Responses to Keeping a Secret – Flash Fiction Friday

  1. Naomi says:

    FINDING OUT WHAT????? Great post honey


  2. ERP says:

    Great post Sweets! Finding out what? LOL Come on…give. give…give


  3. Sara York says:

    Great post. I guess she knows!


  4. leebrazil says:

    yikes! I guess he was right to be worried!


  5. Oh snap! What did she find out about? All kinds of ideas are whirling about in my head. he was cheating, wasn’t he? Cheater, cheater, pumpkin eater! LOL! Great post! Merry Christmas.


  6. Katie Harper says:

    Aw shit….someone’s about to get cut.



  7. davee says:

    OOOH, what’s she gonna find out????? Great FFF. Merry Christmas!


  8. Eden Connor says:

    Incredible post, so much tension in so few words. (bow) Have a very Merry Christmas. 😉


  9. Gemma Parkes says:

    Ooh, clever girl has done a little digging whilst he’s been away! Gotcha Devlin!


  10. Wow, what at way to leave a cliff hanger. Nicely done.


  11. Bonni Sansom says:

    Give me the rest of the story!!! I wanna know what she knows.


  12. Cass, you and I do think alike. Now, I wonder what surprise she has in store for him? Of course, this story could go in a number of different directions and that’s what makes it a great FF post. Nicely done.


  13. Yikes! Well, maybe he’s hiding a ring behind his back and she just isn’t ready for that step. *laughs* Happy Holidays, Cassandra!


  14. Venus says:

    Loved it! But need to know who SHE is.


  15. CJM says:

    Someone’s going to get in trouble!! Great FFF.


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